“Apu-Apurva, ae aapan rastyat aaho. Ar-ey… loka baghat aahe,” he muttered while trying to get her to keep some distance between them but she just tightened her hold around him.
“Mag? Loka baghat aahe tar kay? Ain’t my fault if they’ve nothing else to do!”
He mentally facepalmed at his wife’s indifference toward the several pair of eyes that were throwing weird glances at them.
“Tu mala aadhi ka nahi sangitlas? Mi kalach parat aale aste na ghari! Atti kadhich bari zali. Mi tar bas asech thamble hote.”
He couldn’t stop cursing himself for revealing to her that the unexpected failure of the project that he was handling had upset him.
“Aani yeun kay kela asta?” he asked, staring into her complaining orbs when she raised her head from his shoulder.
“Yeun kay kela asta mhanje? Kahihi kela asta. Tashihi tula mi vedich watate mag vedepana pahun at least hasla tar astas?”
“Tu aadhi zara…” he murmured, getting her hands off his back, “zara lamb rahtes? Sagle baghtat aahe. Bara nahi watat…”
“Boring Khadoos Kanitkar,” she commented, rolling her eyes. “Kiti re rather kashi re tula saglyanchi itki padli aste nehmi? Ekala tari olakhtos ka tu ithe? Ek tari olakhto ka tula ithe? Mag kay sarkha sarkha tech tech? Lok kay mhantil. Lok kay mhantil. Arey lok kay mhantil ha vichar pan aapanach kela tar te kay kartil? Pratyekala aapla kaam karu de na, hmm?”
He let out a sigh. “Tuzyashi bolna mhanje…”
“Mhanje? Vichar karun uttar de, Khadoos! Tu je kahi bolshil tyavar dependent aahe ki tula aaj dinner madhe kay milel. Karapleli chapati ki tandalachi Kheer! Tar aata sang… mazyashi bolna mhanje?”
Anticipated, she hated how long he was taking to respond. She slapped his arm. “Bol na patkan!”
He chuckled before intertwining their fingers while walking her to the auto-rickshaw.
“Tuzyashi bolna mhanje maze sagle problems visarna,
Dolyat tuzya baghun eka veglyach jagat haravna.
Ya Shishta Bahulicha Khadoos Teddy hona,
Ticha doka ya hatavar gheun aahe tya kshanat jagayla shikna!”
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This is a random piece of fiction. Absolute imagination. Kind of a random mini tale based on the picture.
I really loved your idea behind this fiction… Shashank upset due to a failure and Apurva consoling him…
If we could get some of the sort in serial it would be so good, as it will again highlight contrasts between both of them, and how, together they complete each other in such situations…
Shashank, being the charector he is, must have seldom faced any failures, most probably not any… So it might be hard for him to cope up with the situation and rise from failure.
On the other hand, Apurva has faced failures in her life. She knows how to deal with them. She knows how to smile and make people happy even when you are dealing with sorrow and pain of your failure.
So a situation like you have imagined would present a different and unexplored side of theirs… as an individual and as a pair too…
This idea really hooked me… So I cannot help but imagine such type of conversation between the two…
Obviously, I can only imagine in my mind, not being brilliant with words as you are:)- but still that imagining also gave me so much of happiness…(Am I being too clumsy ?)
I know, writers work on their inner instinct, but still I can’t help… I would really love to read if you explore this idea .. I am sorry for being demanding…
But this is just because I love your fanfics a lot…💜 You can completely ignore it.
I know this reply has been a clumsy and demanding one. But please please bear it…
Will you ?
Lots of love 💜
No, you’re not being clumsy at all! I appreciate you asking me but I am not sure if I am keen on exploring this further at the moment. Maybe later in future?
Thank you for the sweet affection and generous affection. It keeps me going. I am pretty much interested in Shashank breaking down ( for a change ) and Apurva being the one to hold and comfort him. Hopefully soon! 🤗
Same here….
Now we have got quite lot of times Apurva breaking down and Shashank consoling her. So I am really interested if something other way round is shown…
Also Shashank breaking down at a certain point would add a new dimension to his charector, as it will show his pain which he is still able to conceal. The pain which he silently holds in his eyes. (And Chetan is too good in portraying emotions through his eyes. He makes up with his silent acting and shows Shashank’s pain when the dialogues completely ignore Shashank’s point of view.
In recent episodes he has nailed it… When verbally he keeps saying Apurva to go away, but he has shown Shashank’s pain and agony behind those words…even when no explicit dialogue for the cause was given to him…We as a viewer can feel his pain.)
Yes to hope is the only thing we could stick to…
Thank you, Avi! I am glad you enjoyed reading! 💜
You got that right. Shashank’s struggle to cope with failures since he might have rarely had to deal with them versus Apurva’s approach to handle failures since they’ve been more like clingy, annoying friends to her!
Sooner or later, we might see something along these lines in the show as well. Hopefully! 💜
It is so nice interacting with you dear …💜💜